If you run the
Declaration of Independence through a grammar and style checker, you will find
that it takes a modern college education to understand. I would argue that most of today’s
graduates do not understand it, but perhaps that is only from the lack of trying.
The founders of our
republic were not average. They
were successful merchants and farmers and craftsmen. George Washington was a surveyor. (Quick: what is the square root of three? A surveyor has memorized that as
securely as most literate Americans have memorized the letter after R.) If you drink beer you know the Sam Adams brand. It seems common enough, until you extrapolate from zymurgy to genetic
engineering.
Jonathan Trumbull's Signing of the Declaration of Independence from the Library of Congress website |
Karl Popper’s
ringing plea, The Open Society and Its
Enemies, was an appeal to ignorance. We do not know everything. Indeed, we
cannot. New discoveries reveal that what we know today might not be true
tomorrow. Against that the
fascists and communists of Popper’s time and the jihadi of our own offer
intransigent commitment to claims of absolute certainty. Thus, the collapse of
Arab Spring led to the rise of ISIS.
But an alternative
exists. Reality, reason, egoism,
capitalism, and romanticism comprise the parameters of philosophical
objectivism. Ayn Rand’s capital-O
Objectivism is just one expression of that. The broader philosophical
objectivism, i.e., rational-empiricism,
is the foundation of political freedom and social tolerance.
But it is not
easy, and nothing in the stars says that it must be. When Ptolemy I Soter complained
to Euclid that geometry was difficult, the latter said that there is no royal
road. In other words, there is no way to make this easier. Thinking is hard
work. It is easy to condemn the
physically lazy, but no special sin exists for the intellectually slothful—except,
of course, sloth itself. Among the
Texas State Guard, my email sigline is “Sapientia
ardua est.”
Widespread intelligence
and education are the basis for political freedom. Of axiomatic necessity, most people are average. Therefore, it might be argued that it
takes a committed engagement by an intellectual elite to bring about a better
form of government. However, the Flynn Effect posits that we are all smarter
now than our ancestors of 100 or 200 years ago. Maybe we just are not applying our intelligence to the right
problems.
On my Macintosh, I
have Word 2008, and its Spelling and Grammar checker seems to have a ceiling of
12th grade. Nothing scores more difficult. So, I ran the Declaration of Independence through several readability engines available on a website created by one Brian Scott. (“ReadabilityFormulas.com
is a non-commercial ‘passion project’ created by freelance writer Brian Scott.
The website offers free information and tools to understand readability
formulas. Visit Brian's other
websites, LousyWriter.com and FreelanceWriting.com.”)
FIRST TWO PARAGRAPHS
Readability Consensus
Grade Level: 19
Reading Level: difficult to read.
Reader's Age: College graduate
LONG TRAIN OF ABUSES
Readability Consensus
Grade Level: 23
Reading Level: very difficult to read.
Reader's Age: College graduate
LAST THREE PARAGRAPHS
Readability Consensus
Grade Level: 16
Reading Level: difficult to read.
Reader's Age: College graduate
Modernizing the
presentation does lower the readability to grade 7.8. Now it resembles Peter Norvig’s PowerPoint presentation of the
Gettysburg Address (here).
We
hold these truths to be self-evident:
- All men are created equal.
- They are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights.
- Among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.
- To secure these rights, Governments are instituted among Men.
- Governments derive their just powers from the consent of the governed.
- Whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it.
- The people may institute new Government.
- The foundation of the new Government rests on such principles as to them shall seem most likely to effect their Safety and Happiness.
- The Government should organize its powers in such form.
ALSO ON NECESSARY FACTS
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